Date : Sun, 11 Oct 2009 04:34:44 +0200
From : david@... (David Boddie)
Subject: Review: Micro Men
On Sun Oct 11 00:27:12 BST 2009, Michael Firth wrote:
> "There are some scenes that aren't in the film that Chris Curry told us
> that were so libellous towards himself that we took them out"
>
> I read that bit a different way - to me it sounds like Curry gave them
> additional material that they felt couldn't be used as it was too near the
> knuckle.
Yes, adding a missing comma after "told us" changes the meaning of the
sentence. Overuse of the word "that" in the sentence doesn't make it easy
to parse, either. :-)
David